Under the moon

BY:皎杰

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特别谢谢Alexandra 帮忙修改……(哭……杰错了一大半)

"Ah, Hiei, do you like the moon?" Kurama sat beside Hiei, and said with a smile.
A very beautiful smile. 
The smile attracted Hiei…

"Yes…" Hiei bent his head, looked at Kurama, and embraced Kurama…more and more closely…

it was ten o'clock, kurama sat beside hiei…
One hour later, kurama still sat beside hiei …

It was very quiet, the moon, pale, mysterious and beautiful…

A long time had past…

"Do you love me?" across the long time, kurama asked…
"Humph!" hiei turned his head, looked at distant place, but his face had turned red…
"Please…tell me…OK? Hiei…" kurama asked again, with a very sad expression.
"Why did you ask me such as this?" hiei couldn't understand what kurama said, he looked at kurama strangely.
"Answer me…please…OK?" kurama gazed at hiei.
Touched the warm sight of Kurama, Hiei's face obviously turned red again, and then hiei bent his head and kissed kurama..
"Thanks…"
"Why did you…"
"Very cold, isn't it? My lip…"kurama grieved …
"Why? Answer me!!" hiei said very stirred.
"Hiei, tell me, if I leave the world, you can't…"
"No! You won't leave the world, you won't! Surely!" then, hiei hugged kurama tightly…and kissed kurama's cheek, kissed kurama's lip…
"Hiei…answer me," kurama said, "If I die, you can't control death…"one tear dropped down on the floor. (Faint, kurama san cry?)
"No! You lied to me! I can never believe it! You will live, and live with me forever!"
Hiei hugged kurama more and more closely…
"No…" kurama pushed hiei away, said, "minamino's clay has already reached limit, yoke's bewitching hasn't kept this body already…I think l will die as soon as the sun rises…"
"No…you won't…"hiei cried hopelessly …
"Look at the moon…"kurama said to hiei, "It was pale and mysterious in the dark sky, maybe when it disappear, I'll disappear, too. But I praise it, because you are happy under the moon…"

peace…

the moon still pale, mysterious and beautiful…

time warp

the sunlight appeared on the east sky…

Kurama fell asleep…
Sleeps forever…

<the end>


The red words are the parts that I didn't catch the meaning very well, and I didn't change too much, only some mistakes at grammar and tense. However, basically your article is very touching. I'm sure you will improve your English after practice. J

Best regards,

Alexandra 

 
     

 

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